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Re: Deja Vu

Postby Just Silver » Dec 13th, '13, 17:33

Good story guy

Usually I don't get into the devil talking back type songs but you killed this one

Flow is on point and choice of words painted the picture
The hood/blood end rhyme threw me off but it still sounded natural

Pretty nice only question was there a particular drug your talking about?
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Re: Deja Vu

Postby SoldierShady » Dec 13th, '13, 18:18

Damn. Your rhyming has improved a lot son. :y:
"So one last time, I'm back, 'fore it fades into black and it's all over, behold the final chapter in the saga, trying to recapture that lightning trapped in a bottle twice, the magic that started it all...tragic portrait of an artist tortured....trapped in his own drawings..." - Bruce.

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Re: Deja Vu

Postby MC_Cotton » Dec 14th, '13, 22:13

This is dope! I love the message, resisting temptation, trusting in god, being tempted, but not giving in!! Nice!!
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Re: Deja Vu

Postby shadyblogger » Dec 14th, '13, 22:22

I thought it was pretty cool. Some of the rhymes were pretty interesting. It was interesting and fun to read.
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Re: Deja Vu

Postby Never_Enough » Dec 16th, '13, 23:49

Pretty good. Great to read, flows really well and, of course, nice rhymes.
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Re: Deja Vu

Postby Francesco » Dec 17th, '13, 00:46

Good one Ray... some great lines and a cool & interesting story to be honest. :y:
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Re: Deja Vu

Postby hellbound renegade » Jan 16th, '14, 17:29

This is really good! You've got sick multi syllables bro, and even though at first the subject matter didn't seem to promising I ended up finding it quite interesting. The flow felt natural rather than being forced so... overall, good!
But for me to rap like a computer must be in my genes, I got a laptop in my back pocket! I'll shit on you!! Shady da goat, STAY WIDE AWAKE!...
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