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Deja Vu

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Re: Deja Vu

Postby hellbound renegade » Jan 16th, '14, 17:29

This is really good! You've got sick multi syllables bro, and even though at first the subject matter didn't seem to promising I ended up finding it quite interesting. The flow felt natural rather than being forced so... overall, good!
But for me to rap like a computer must be in my genes, I got a laptop in my back pocket! I'll shit on you!! Shady da goat, STAY WIDE AWAKE!...
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