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Silver style/ lines explained

Postby Just Silver » Jan 22nd, '14, 16:38

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Tried something different please feed lol

Tighter than a hymen when I'm rhymin
A touch of the psilocybin I feel fine again
Paper colored Heineken Heinz on your Letterman
I'm so high I can see all the dead men
My beds like quicksand use my dick as a kickstand
Flip you off for an hour then just switch hands
Too advanced for the salty your a grain of sand
I've been the man on the moon before the kudi kid
Spit like Cancun your Vancouver cool warm the fuck up its just
I move with tools the size of Olympic swimming pools my spits cruel
Ill finish crews at their necks like a tee in a dump truck
Most are dumb fucks like oops the wrong hole
Have you swollen from head to toe
Boom I explode on the masses in the mass state
I flow like liquid but fire in the ashtray
They mix well as you can tell I'm something else
Come to my house and ill serve verses like a butler
Hope your never butthurt smooth like melted butter
Your marginally margarine not gonna win
Your a joke in front of an audience
I keep a tighter circle than Audi did
With a shotty to your ribs messy garments
For the paper color former Garnet
Buzz like a hornet when im on it never beg a pardon
Non apologetic is it genetics are just growing older
Im goin for the heavy golden stats of flowing
Call me the golden shower pissed off and ill devour
Any coward ..smoking sour in a suite keif like an ashy knee
Who's the best can't be asking me
Go harder than a faggots treat throughout the week
I write for myself life is bleak highs are my peaks
Smoke the grass on the other side a lighter green
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Re: Silver style

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Jan 22nd, '14, 17:14

Step up from your rhyming from your last collab. Looks likes its just bars, not bad, some good lines. Cool drop.
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Re: Silver style

Postby Just Silver » Jan 22nd, '14, 17:18

PAINKILLƎR wrote:Step up from your rhyming from your last collab. Looks likes its just bars, not bad, some good lines. Cool drop.

Thanks guy

Ya my last collab drop was sorta poo
Plus that verse was like a month old lol
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Re: Silver style

Postby CanadaPure » Jan 23rd, '14, 05:16

I like it as far as just bars go, either I'm a retard or some shit didn't make any sense though lmao.

"Paper colored Heineken Heinz on your Letterman"

Paper colored Heineken Heinz? Wot? (It still made me chuckle, so I guess it was good in that way hehe).

Good drop.
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Re: Silver style

Postby shadyblogger » Jan 23rd, '14, 06:54

I liked this. Your rhyming and flow are really improving. The way you word your phrases is getting better too. I like it. Good stuff.
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Re: Silver style

Postby Just Silver » Jan 23rd, '14, 13:06

CanadaPure wrote:I like it as far as just bars go, either I'm a retard or some shit didn't make any sense though lmao.

"Paper colored Heineken Heinz on your Letterman"

Paper colored Heineken Heinz? Wot? (It still made me chuckle, so I guess it was good in that way hehe).

Good drop.

Thanks guy it did make sense though lol

Heineken is green and heinz is red
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Re: Silver style

Postby Just Silver » Jan 23rd, '14, 13:13

shadyblogger wrote:I liked this. Your rhyming and flow are really improving. The way you word your phrases is getting better too. I like it. Good stuff.

Thanks guy

Any lines you guys can't understand just ask lol
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Re: Silver style/ lines explained

Postby LilWayneNorwayLove » Jan 23rd, '14, 16:02

This was nice, i liked this more so than some of your other verses. it's diferent.
But do u ever sing them so that we can listen? (sry did not have time to look around) cuz i would like to know how u flow it :)

"I'm gone like delete and erase (the lead in a race)"
"No brake lights on my car rear"
"Magazine full of bullets, you can be my cover girl"
"I'm outstandin' like standin' outside Up in the twister and walkin' Not damaged"
"Shots through the driver side, that mean the driver died, Car crash kill the passenger, double homicide"
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Re: Silver style/ lines explained

Postby Just Silver » Jan 23rd, '14, 17:26

Yea I used to lol but usually ill just read it to myself

This piece had some parts where the flow was tough but still works
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Re: Silver style

Postby CanadaPure » Jan 23rd, '14, 21:38

Just Silver wrote:Thanks guy it did make sense though lol

Heineken is green and heinz is red


Welp. Apparently I suck at understanding things.
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Re: Silver style/ lines explained

Postby Just Silver » Jan 23rd, '14, 21:42

Lol :/

Any other lines you don't understand just ask
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Re: Silver style/ lines explained

Postby Just Silver » Jan 25th, '14, 23:32

Last bump new project
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