ForNever

[Dewey Decimal]

Found anc old piece so i touched it up, unfinished and whatevers there might get tweaked or even deleted

Verse 1
If i said i liked air, she'd wanna get smothered
Cuz she always seems to hate me more than i love her
She's Quiet When Im Trying to Talk Her Up and Chat
Shes Rock and i Am Rap I Think She's Yet to Realize That Opposites Attract
She's The Player And I'm Rooting For The Team
Shes the Movie, Im The Screen, And you are now Watching The Beauty And The Beast
Called her a slut, she called me a player
I was a fan but she was a hater
Lived in the same house but i felt like her neighbor
Used to be it all and now shes a stranger
fought for our love, but she was a pacifist 
She was my brad pitt. but i was her jennifer aniston 
i tell her shes cute, she says im ugly
I finally call her a bitch and she said she loves me
 
Chorus (singing)
I love her, forever and always
She loves me, ForNever, the song plays
I love her, for better or worse
But she'd sell me for less than im worth
She loves me, forever and always
I love her, ForNever, the song plays
She loves me, for better or worse
But id sell her for less than shes worth

Verse 2
Shes slow and im fast, i folded my hand
Used to care too much now im a sociopath
She told me the truth yo, but it coulda been a lie so who knows?
Turns out this whole time i was digging for fools gold


Shes my love and my hate, and id pull it and shoot
But i know id end up taking the bullet for you

Kid with his pants torn, Shes the slut on the dance floor
Marry me now and the world is half yours

Chorus

Outro
She'd hold her breathe til she chokes to death
Said id follow u anywhere so i broke my neck
bodies in a lobby and our souls connect
Forever or never, cuz in our world no is yes

Chorus (fades as song ends)
viewtopic.php?f=24&t=169511&p=2583617#p2583617

[Dewey Decimal]

Just read it over , deff needs work. The ideas there tho .. suggestions?

[shadyblogger]

A bit offbeat but still really good

[Francesco]

Nice one yo... I'm glad to see you back at it.

[Eedee]

You had some nice rhyme schemes in there for sure.

[Just Silver]

Damn I'm pissed I missed this one

Excellent first verse like damn almost flawless flow
Chorus was even good a little bit long but it was great

Was confused how the second verse was all chopped and short but even this was good

Overall one of your better pieces very nice