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That Silver Character

Postby Just Silver » Mar 5th, '14, 14:04

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Sleeping bag gloves knockem out cold
Take out his stuffing like a fucking scarecrow
Im here for the gold overlooked silver in their books
Since a member I've been fairly observed my verses versus a hook
Could have you mangled and shook im the person working his work
As this berserk hybrid perked half alert jerk
Thatd probably get up on your nerves
But it aint painted as the best sculpture and shit
It's so intense see my points like tents through your lense
As the bass causes hairline cracks hairline lifted back
From the stress of life and lack of exercise
I need an extra life hit the brick block with the mushroom
Talk verbatim with talk in the meeting room undefeatable too
A big block if you rush whom makes your stab wounds look mad cool
In the geometric shapes of prisms before a meet with the prisons so relentless
To space or heaven sent with the haze scent
No religion just my intuition to get it
It's been slacking put trust me ill be there in a minute
A whole 60 seconds with many directions
As the clock goes tick my vital signs become sicker
What was once prime in form became an unfiltered liver
But these deliveries are fresh like nurseries theres no room or word
For these other MCs mentalities seriously go through all black burglary
With some urns and things I should've took that tourny piece
But fuck it im stuck packing bowls and burning trees
Well as of recently im the shit like an active colon burn to the third degree
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Re: That Silver Character

Postby shadyblogger » Mar 6th, '14, 03:10

Nice bro. It's good that you keep writing so much. Good stuff
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Re: That Silver Character

Postby Just Silver » Mar 6th, '14, 03:17

Thanks guy :y: keeping it alive
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Re: That Silver Character

Postby Just Silver » Mar 6th, '14, 03:46

I saved two drafts in creation bursts so about 45 min within two days
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Re: That Silver Character

Postby Just Silver » Mar 6th, '14, 14:54

First bump of the day and last of today
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Re: That Silver Character

Postby Just Silver » Mar 7th, '14, 00:15

Thanks guy my next will be a topical :y:
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Re: That Silver Character

Postby Just Silver » Mar 7th, '14, 00:43

Thanks guy first real feed :y:
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Re: That Silver Character

Postby Just Silver » Mar 8th, '14, 18:26

Final bump then new project
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Re: That Silver Character

Postby RadishRun » Mar 8th, '14, 20:38

Bars 1-7 :worship:

Middle seemed to get a bit weak, but you picked it back up at the end.

And damn man you're all over this CW forum, too bad it seems kinda empty around here; you're inspiring me to post a piece.
Ain't nobody who's as good at what I do
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Re: That Silver Character

Postby Just Silver » Mar 8th, '14, 20:51

RadishRun wrote:Bars 1-7 :worship:

Middle seemed to get a bit weak, but you picked it back up at the end.

And damn man you're all over this CW forum, too bad it seems kinda empty around here; you're inspiring me to post a piece.

Hell ya thanks guy
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