Word War 3 Chat

[CrashBand]

Just Silver proving my comments and lyrics about judging.

[PAINKILLƎR]

Sorry for the wait spyder, I was busy in the morning and I was hoping I'd be able to do it on my computer when I got home but didn't get the chance to because I ran into some trouble so I said Rick it and did it on my phone, sorry for any grammatical or punctual errors guys Haha.

[CanadaPure]

Sorry for the wait spyder, I was busy in the morning and I was hoping I'd be able to do it on my computer when I got home but didn't get the chance to because I ran into some trouble so I said Rick it and did it on my phone, sorry for any grammatical or punctual errors guys Haha.

Pretty men.

[PAINKILLƎR]

Sorry for the wait spyder, I was busy in the morning and I was hoping I'd be able to do it on my computer when I got home but didn't get the chance to because I ran into some trouble so I said Rick it and did it on my phone, sorry for any grammatical or punctual errors guys Haha.

Pretty men.

Pretty meh, meant say "meh" :[

[Mr.DGAF]

Didn't really get the need for the links, but good battle regardless.

[CrashBand]

Yeah they weren't that important. It just sort of put the quote in context.

Also, with the new fucked up search function, I wasn't able to link it directly to your comments, but they were all examples of you essentially praising multis, and nothing else.

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I'm kind of tired of judges not really substantiating anything, tbh.

[Mr.DGAF]

Haha I feel you. I mean, at least to me, like two or three of those examples seem like stretches but I see what you were going for.

Did like the route you took tho. Kinda worked especially with the voting.

[CrashBand]

Perhaps, I do think it would have hit a lot better had it been on your comments. I only included the first one because it was already linked to your comment, so people knew what was happening.

Basically what Menzo and T-Rex said. This verse is great with the rhyming. The topic is played, yes, but it's important to focus on improving in one aspect first. And with the rhyming, you have definitely improved. The length of rhymes, their placement, how they craft the flow, it's all improving, and that's a great sign.

This is pretty good my man. The multies were seriously on point, like that was impressive how you used them in this. Didn't falter at all, the flow was solid, but like I said, the multies make this verse. Good stuff indeed bruh.

Also, we still need to get a collab in man, I remember it came up a while ago or something, I think, and we mos def need to do that soon.

It was okay. I liked a few lines, my favorite was "the ill in me" line. But the flow was a bit difficult to pick up on, and the rhyming wasn't really spectacular save for maybe a few lines.

Solid stuff though. Keep working at it, this is pretty good.

[CrashBand]

The gun is holstered, when exposed you’ll say it’s gotta be “hip”

So if I'm “m8” just flip the 8 until his fave is Infinite

those were straight out of bad bars tbh

and Mr. DGAF's new alias

[Mr.DGAF]

Haha you got me homie. Glad to hear your input.

I'm taco from the league.

[Eedee]

Cripple battle

The Walt Jr struggle

[Spyder]

hage verse is fire



beyond anything ive seen

[Eedee]

hage verse is fire



beyond anything ive seen

Felina

[DetroitSkills]

hage verse is fire



beyond anything ive seen

[Spyder]

posted ya rat bastahds