The FX of a Canadian Pickle

[Spyder]

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Let me press a statement, set it straight 'fore i dent his face in
they say i lack personals, cant do comedy, doesnt bother me i accept the changes.
when you do 100 pieces with 100 plus views, against up and comers with something to prove
of course they can find info, while im rummaging through like i got nothing to lose.
but fuck it, every battle now is a priority no more of me spitting these Free's
and 'fore you make the "Spyder bites" punch thats been done like 90 times -
when you spit ten times the punches, guess im like fuck it, if i have a similar scheme.
~now lets get started~
tired of bitches that only-rap-filler its like you just piss in the breeze
Mike Jackson, Mic Thriller no, Zodiac Killer, aint nothing for me to kill a sixteen!!
I wonder if Eedee is still headless... shit no dis-respect kid
judging by your tape i guess for abstinence we know what the 'FX is.' (effect)
i mean cmon Dilz, i called you out you accepted than never showed up
i guess your names fitting when 'FX ratings leave every show fucked.'
youve never dropped a battle, or CW piece but fronting hes a writer,
cause without your delivery, your lyrics leave something to be desired.
acting like he hard, this kid just lives for danger, balls up fists of anger
sits on his hands and jerks it, we call that shit The Stranger!
im just 'fucking with F... X' but honestly kid ive figured you out
me pointing out your weak spots... i guess Dilz in a pickle now. (corny right?)
this was light work like mic serge, if you really wanna get at me
respond with your little disability, then youll see my diss-ability!
now CP, its time for you,
youre the kinda-dude to refresh your own drop like 92 times-just-to spike his views
then keep reminding you hes a better writer-due to what he types-is-viewed more times than you.
bitch made ~
this is Christopher Wallace vs Christopher Walkins, but act all BIG when he writing dude
like "been in this since 20-1-2 look at the shit ive been through." ill introduce your windpipe to,
my switch blade~
but I aint mad at ya, you got the win and cleared house when it came down to votes
even though i feel you stole my bread... i aint 'sour doe.' (oh that was whack i know)
but lets think, i took a loss to you, Slik, Block, and even DGAF
people still peep every track even if its whack and theres a reason for that.
they know what im capable of and we'll just leave it at that...
even though im not champ people still excited that Spyder is back,
still say im their favorite battler, some say this sites ever had!
now that im Smooth Sailing they prolly say i stole swag from Pat Stay...
thats lame they just cant Stay at the top ill laugh when these cats stray.
im just setting these Cats-Straight while i Castrate~
wanna play the part ill even Cast-Ray, any of you fags can Catch-Strays!!

[CanadaPure]

Hah. Aint dat some shiz.

I'm excited dat spyder is back doe.

[DetroitSkills]

lol pat stay

[Spyder]

Haha in the battle scene.

Cw dead as fuck

[Flamez]

nice yo I liked it was good. haha

and yes it's dead here..

[Dewey Decimal]

Pure ether. Cant really give you any pointers you know what youre doing



Keep writing

[Spyder]

That was light work bruv. Just wait for someone to take the bait

[Just Silver]

I liked this piece it had a shaky flow though at times

I feel the title is keeping you from getting views it's very odd lol although I'm not one to talk about that
Beginning was smooth but once it broke off to the main diss part it was quite different not necessarily bad but messed with some lines flow ability

Overall good stuff although some lines were admittedly corny

[Spyder]

Ya the title is meant to get views haha. Like whose not gonna read that lol

[SandMan]

Nice I like the rhyme schemes, however I felt it hard to catch the flow at a lot of parts, nice piece though