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dewey fractions

Postby Dewey Decimal » Mar 28th, '14, 01:03

Deweys an artist, cops ask me what im guardin'
Oblivious to the weed plants that are growing in the garden
Niggas might be dumb but dewey is retarded
Niggas might be spaced out but dewey Is a martian
Taking my leftovers, remora under my shark fin
Full of yourselfs, these pigs just ate pork
10 bucks a gram u get what u pay for
Say im nuts like acorns, Trade my lambo in for a skateboard
Money and jewels, dozens of shoes
Niggas think theyre fly til they jump off a roof
Dew is the new jekyll n hyde
And this liquors the elixer that makes my identitys spike
So i stay drinking that henny in stride
just know every real nigga has their feminine side
Dews the new pac so call the cops please
Aint got a phone to call my shawty
So i talk to my bitch on the walkie talkie
Dewey in a jeep stalking the popparazi
Lost to menzo , now im hungrier than mahatma ghandi
(whaddup my dude)


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Re: dewey fractions

Postby Dewey Decimal » Mar 28th, '14, 01:07

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Re: dewey fractions

Postby SandMan » Mar 28th, '14, 01:40

Damnnnn good piece dude I like all the metaphors you used, when I first started this piece I thought wow this is good because of the wordplay/ comparisons, however only rhyming 2 syllables then at the end it picked up to three and kept up with the cleverness I really liked the piece dude nice job.
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Re: dewey fractions

Postby sick_male_28 » Apr 15th, '14, 12:07

cool song
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