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Random spit..

Postby Flamez » Apr 24th, '14, 20:30

LOF: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=170970&p=2646000#p2646000

Whatever came to mind I just wrote..

Call the fire department I poured gasoline on myself
Lit up a match I’m on fire it’s that burning smell
Coming into view is a threat turning into a flame
a sizzling name that’ll haunt you in your nightmares
it will taunt you with a death stare and rip you apart
shit you watch kid I kill you rot your heart stops
in a body bag you’ll be put in an unmarked grave
so young smart and brave yet I got videotapes
of you being gay a demonstration of you sucking dick
outside church for money what a nasty fuckin pig
dumpin 'n eatin shit resulting in you getting a disease
up on stage on your knees so calm feeling the breeze
cocks popping up everywhere believe me it’s like a rooster farm
this is like Farmville with so many users on
a tripod’s set up gotta get it all on film start making cash
shit why don't I just brand a brazzers logo on everyone’s ass
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Re: Random spit..

Postby Just Silver » Apr 24th, '14, 21:59

This line was like lol wtf-cocks popping up everywhere believe me it’s like a rooster farmthis is like Farmville with so many users on

The beginning was hit or miss for me but it got better as it progressed imo
Although it was so random some of it washard to enjoy and not quite comparable to some of your older pieces
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Re: Random spit..

Postby Flamez » Apr 25th, '14, 01:47

lol after reading it again I see what you mean. haha
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