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Mr. FreeVerse vs. no one (audio link included)

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Re: Mr. FreeVerse vs. no one (audio link included)

Postby Just Silver » Apr 24th, '14, 20:28

Thanks guy
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Re: Mr. FreeVerse vs. no one (audio link included)

Postby Eedee » Apr 25th, '14, 10:00

I really liked this... I like how your bars just went smoothly together, the rhyming/assonance was really fun to read. Good shit homie.

Smoke something like weigh an ounce smash shit
Like the hulk when he pounce buy in bulk and amounts
To flip then bounce with numerous bank accounts


That part was my favorite
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Re: Mr. FreeVerse vs. no one (audio link included)

Postby Just Silver » Apr 25th, '14, 13:05

Thanks guy this is my first audio of a few to come lol
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Re: Mr. FreeVerse vs. no one (audio link included)

Postby Eedee » Apr 25th, '14, 13:18

I didn't even listen to the audio... wtf lol
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Re: Mr. FreeVerse vs. no one (audio link included)

Postby Just Silver » Apr 25th, '14, 13:19

Lol listen via vocaroo

I was on percs when I recorded
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Re: Mr. FreeVerse vs. no one (audio link included)

Postby Eedee » Apr 25th, '14, 13:27

Hmm, well yeah you do sound high as fuck lol
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Re: Mr. FreeVerse vs. no one (audio link included)

Postby Just Silver » Apr 25th, '14, 13:30

Lol :y:

It was because someone wanted to hear my flow
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Re: Mr. FreeVerse vs. no one (audio link included)

Postby Just Silver » Apr 26th, '14, 14:31

Final bump new project already up
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