Rhythmic and Robotic

by **Just Silver** » May 10th, '14, 06:39

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Short nerves on his surface, about to just short circuit
The wordsmith with the most perfectly stirred verses
The words murder, like a forensic case ,burbs and shit
I feel the turbulence, upgraded with turbo kits
Think so many rhymes, I'm nervous just to develop it
Embellish it a bit , it'd be hell if I quit, its really all I got
Intelligent as shit, I live under a rock
Like patrick star , insulted, you know who you faggots are
With the weed I grab a jar, write a bar,molten rip magma apart
I rip this shit like hogan, the whole shirt open
Try to throw dirt on my name like my casket is closin
I just ask you to behold this, motive and motion
And not make jokes and shit, fully I'm reloading this
Never hold clips, Just a pen to go and write my shit
Lighter bic, flame when I'm called out in vain
I feel ashamed of ashtrays ,I know I live that way
People just don't understand my situation
It's not easy to stay in, so dickheads keep on what your saying
Ad I keep the heat of my speech strong, no hesitation

by **mdemaz** » May 10th, '14, 06:58

I didn't think Americans used the word dickhead.

Hah.

by **Just Silver** » May 10th, '14, 07:05

Lol yep

by **Just Silver** » May 10th, '14, 14:21

by **cement** » May 10th, '14, 14:27

bumperty bumpettanus

by **Just Silver** » May 10th, '14, 14:29

Thank u any bump not from me is appreciated

by **Just Silver** » May 11th, '14, 13:27

by **Just Silver** » May 11th, '14, 19:40

Lol I love that word

by **Just Silver** » May 11th, '14, 20:02

One real set of feed then new project

by **gutawafang** » May 12th, '14, 00:32

Vocab is good. Mutlis not bad, just that I don't catch the flow.

by **Just Silver** » May 12th, '14, 00:35

gutawafang wrote:Vocab is good. Mutlis not bad, just that I don't catch the flow.

I can vocaroo lol

My flow varies

by **gutawafang** » May 12th, '14, 00:35

Just Silver wrote:
gutawafang wrote:Vocab is good. Mutlis not bad, just that I don't catch the flow.

I can vocaroo lol

My flow varies

I don't like variable flows.

by **Just Silver** » May 12th, '14, 00:40

Oh poo lol

I don't usually either but my mind told me to on this one

by **gutawafang** » May 12th, '14, 00:40

Just Silver wrote:Oh poo lol

I don't usually either but my mind told me to on this one

looking forward to next one

by **Just Silver** » May 12th, '14, 00:44

Thanks guy :y:

I enjoy it

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