22- keystyle files

by **Just Silver** » Jul 5th, '14, 13:57

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22 on the milli, 22 for the age ,send it to
A mother fucker ,makem suffer like aids
I got my choppers in front ,with them live grenades
Make it worldwide taped, inside your driveway
Just a year after drinking ,when that shit be legal
Now we living illegal, blood is painting this easel
Fuck the rats and the weasels ,exterminate when they see you
Determine hate through misunderstanding virtue, I'll hurt you
Lemonade on the wrist cup of piss in which I wish
I'll get this rich, Ill customize my whole bucket list
Bucket hat like a fish, coming back like the scent
Of the haze mind bent ,on point like tridents
You boys, have just said, a bunch of punchlines
I ain't got much time for jokes, I'll laugh when I'm broke
But I'll also laugh when that ass gets smoked
When that cash gets checked and the signature wrote
For me just writing paragraphs, when you picture my quotes
I'm like a lyrical ghost, that transcends readers through roads
Of my own, have you set sail while I'm sinking your boat
I'm just thinking of those who are ahead of me
Jealousy is a sin , and money is a forever thing
With no remedy I'll motivate to get a g and more till It's history

by **Just Silver** » Jul 6th, '14, 12:25

by **mdemaz** » Jul 6th, '14, 12:26

dope m8

by **Just Silver** » Jul 6th, '14, 12:32

Thanks guy but im looking for more depth for a compliment

by **Just Silver** » Jul 7th, '14, 16:59

by **Just Silver** » Jul 8th, '14, 12:16

by **Just Silver** » Jul 9th, '14, 13:16

by **Just Silver** » Jul 10th, '14, 04:25

Final bump next project

by **Just Silver** » Jul 11th, '14, 19:54

One real piece of feed plz

by **EvryOnesACrtc** » Jul 12th, '14, 10:20

Dude, you need more focus. It was kind of all over the place. Idk whether you did that on purpose or what, but I think you should try keeping it more organized and coherent. Sometimes I didn't even know what you were trying to rhyme. Work on that.

It was a fun read. Stylish. Challenge yourself with better rhymes. I know you're capable of it. Instead of posting 13 raps in one entire page on this forum, take some time to write one, well put together, dope ass piece. You'll get more love for it.

by **Just Silver** » Jul 12th, '14, 10:22

Thanks guy but yea it was intentionally non cohesive

Ill try for a more serious piece soon

by **Just Silver** » Jul 15th, '14, 23:38

Last bump

by **Just Silver** » Jul 16th, '14, 18:38

Just Silver wrote:Last bump

Really this time

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