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Just Silver Diss

Postby EvryOnesACrtc » Aug 2nd, '14, 09:39

Nothing personal, just having some fun.

Just...Just...Just quit! You're in a bad slump/
Hell, I'll even give you a cash sum/
to take your lyrics and trash 'em!/
"Last bump! Last bump, I promise, my last bump!"/
Shut your ass up 'fore I punch you with brass knucks/
You sound like a coke head begging your drug dealer/
Just fall back, son---and this isn't some trust builder/
Even picking your name you went with what's fa-miliar/
you said, "I'll never get gold, so f it I'm Just Silver"/
Your rhymes are like vacuum bags; just filler,/
they suck, and where your threads are is where dust filters/
No one likes to read or leave feed on those nonsensical buzz killers/
If I saw you in person, I'd rupture your jugular/
You're puny, I'm muscular; I'm much iller/
I'm At-tila the hun of this rap world; a blood spiller!/
But really...
If you're so good, why you rhyming one sylla...ble for?/
I don't even have beef, just have fun killin' this dork/
Doing it for the hunt; thrill of the sport/
Sad sap grew up in the slums filled with the poor/
I shoulda killed 'em when this chump still wasn't born/
Choked him with his own umbilical cord/
Or worn a rubber with his mother, instead of cum filling the whore/

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Re: Just Silver Diss

Postby Just Silver » Aug 2nd, '14, 12:41

I've heard it all lol nice jab
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Re: Just Silver Diss

Postby mdemaz » Aug 2nd, '14, 12:53

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Re: Just Silver Diss

Postby shadyblogger » Aug 2nd, '14, 18:58

Lmao great piece bro. Great rhymes and some nasty personal disses yet it remained quite comical and fun to read. Props man.
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Re: Just Silver Diss

Postby EvryOnesACrtc » Aug 4th, '14, 09:00

Just Silver wrote:I've heard it all lol nice jab


Lol have you? I checked other people's posts and battles you've been in, but didn't see anyone say the stuff I did.

mdemaz wrote:ded


I will celebrate the day you're ded.

Blogs McGooch wrote:Lmao great piece bro. Great rhymes and some nasty personal disses yet it remained quite comical and fun to read. Props man.


Thanks, dawg. You're always consistently giving me feedback and I really appreciate it.
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Re: Just Silver Diss

Postby TonyTilt » Aug 4th, '14, 12:29

Jesus
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Re: Just Silver Diss

Postby Just Silver » Aug 4th, '14, 13:12

Horses diss was vicious lol
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Re: Just Silver Diss

Postby EvryOnesACrtc » Aug 4th, '14, 23:18

TonyTilt wrote:Jesus


Can you elaborate
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