Never 2 Far (California)

by **Tash8** » Sep 1st, '14, 03:51

LoF: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=173531

just fuckin around, check it out here -> https://soundcloud.com/tam18/far-away

by **TripleNineThree** » Sep 1st, '14, 07:50

I loved the way you flowed on this track. It had a layback feel to it and it fit the style of both the beat and the chorus. The way you matched your style to the beat/concept was probably my favorite part.

One of the negative things on the track is the way your voice is mixed. It's not too big of a deal because the mixing is actually really good on parts (such as the parts you double up your voice) but it sounds like your voice could be a little more crisp and higher quality if that makes sense.

Your lyrics all sounded really good. You had some good multis and none of them felt too forced at all, they went together well.

Overall this was a solid song, it definitely has replay value. Great job! :y:

by **Tash8** » Sep 1st, '14, 21:14

thanks triple

by **MistaVijilantee** » Sep 2nd, '14, 04:47

Whoa, this is actually pretty gnarly.
You really compliment the beat with your rhymes and voice, the hook is also dope.
Have listened to this a few times and I'll give it another listen later, mad impressed tho :y:

by **Tash8** » Sep 2nd, '14, 20:46

thanks mista

by **Mr.DGAF** » Sep 2nd, '14, 21:04

i love that beat man. the flow is cool too, you sound really relaxed in your demeanor and delivery. Agreed with triple that the vocals aren't great sounding, but they don't take away from the song overall, just a small something to work on.

by **Tash8** » Sep 2nd, '14, 22:31

thanks DGAF!

by **Eedee** » Sep 2nd, '14, 23:07

Agreed with everyone above. That beat was soooo gnarly. WHEW

by **Tash8** » Sep 3rd, '14, 23:25

Eedee wrote:Agreed with everyone above. That beat was soooo gnarly. WHEW

thanks Eedee :shifty:

by **TranSlucEnt** » Sep 4th, '14, 01:56

You sound like Kendrick :flutter:

Good job doe. Shits tight mayne

by **Tash8** » Sep 5th, '14, 00:30

TranSlucEnt wrote:You sound like Kendrick

Good job doe. Shits tight mayne

haha alright..thanks

by **Vettori** » Sep 6th, '14, 17:00

I like the flow a lot. The concept is beautiful. You've grown a lot. Production is On point

by **DetroitSkills** » Sep 6th, '14, 21:02

i came into this thread in all honesty expecting to listen to like 30 secs n close it,

WHEW this is dope, really enjoyed it man! ima put it on my iPod tbh, im loving the flow and the beat is flames..
the beat and your voice mesh well, love the tone :b:

by **Tash8** » Sep 8th, '14, 02:57

hell yeah thanks vettori, detroitskills :y:

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