Mathew My Half brother

[Just Silver]

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The only one related to me that I truly respect
Some call it my half brother but I just call him by Mat
My mother left out the "T" and the other father
He grew up with his grandparents I was far behind him
My dad died when I was one I wish I stood beside him
But I didn't, due to my mother's addiction
Going through the government's system since I was little
He grew up on his father's side , yet my only father died
Wishing for the best but if he only knew My own cries
Maybe he'd feel different, he was given the Silver spoon
I was fed with moldy food on spoons with heroin residue
I love him to death, yet I only see him on holidays
And Christmas is the only day , fake smiles then he goes away
He has a career ahead of him, god bless him for that
All I got ahead of me is this drug death trap
He goes back to the big city to Sirius radio
Yet my life is so serious I'll never live that scenario
I wanna show my pain, yet I should man up
But it's tough , when you've never had a real man to tell you toughen up
He's in his early thirties traveling the whole world
I'm in my early twenties already feeling I'm burnt
Straight to hell, no guidance was given barely any supervision
I need to cheat the system, only way of existence
I wonder if he still even loves me, since I know he's making real money

[Supershade]

Most of this doesn't even rhyme

[Just Silver]

Internally it does look it over lol

[Just Silver]

Most of this doesn't even rhyme

Definitely at least slant rhymes

U may have to flow it differently

[Halftongue Dre]

My dad died when I was one I wish I stood beside him
But I didn't, due to my mother's addiction
Going through the government's system since I was little

Dope yo..

[Just Silver]

Thanks guy

[Dewey Decimal]

Lol nice shit silver , venting leads to real raps

[shadyblogger]

Dope shit brah. I really dug the flow and your style on this one. Nice work

[Just Silver]

Thanks guy

[Littliepuppys713]

deep shit