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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby M-Pyre » Oct 17th, '14, 13:09

on this Earth
And since birth I've been cursed with this curse to just curse
And just blurt this berserk and bizarre shit that works

those little things is what makes this sound so fluent
the greatest is hated
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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby SliK » Oct 18th, '14, 00:07

M-Pyre wrote:on this Earth
And since birth I've been cursed with this curse to just curse
And just blurt this berserk and bizarre shit that works

those little things is what makes this sound so fluent

I think since birth/been cursed/just blurt/Bezerk are multis.

This piece flows so well because it is (mostly) written in anapestic tetrameter.
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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby RKOunion » Oct 18th, '14, 10:45

Renegade:

And do you have any clue what I had to do to get here?
I don't
think you do so stay tuned and keep your ears glued to the stereo
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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby SliK » Oct 18th, '14, 10:59

RKOunion wrote:Renegade:

And do you have any clue what I had to do to get here?
I don't
think you do so stay tuned and keep your ears glued to the stereo

That is such a beautifully written rhyme
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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby Amadeo » Oct 18th, '14, 11:33

Menzo wrote:And these kids are like parrots, they run around the house just like terrorists
Screaming, "fuck, shit, fuck" adult with a childish-like arrogance
Wild ever since the day I came out I was like, merits
Fuck that - I'd rather be loud and I like swearing
From the first album even the gals were like "tight lyrics
Dreamy eyes", but my fucking mouth was nightmare-ish

-
Pretty in your face but I dunno why I didn't make the connection that they were all strung together as roughly 5 syllables as opposed to a separate two and three pair :facepalm2

Cool wordplay too, with the adult/childish and dreamy/nightmare antitheses.
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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby shadyblogger » Oct 18th, '14, 20:08

csw621 wrote:i’m in v
ip
with no id
with a pint of beam
lightin chee
ba wylin the fuck out like bie
ber at nineteen
or ice-t
in the nineties
frightening in some nikes
slut nice d’s
there a slight breeze
don’t like me
well then bite me
there might be
a better chance of flight three
seventy
turning up than us bitch highly
unlikely
little dyke think cause i’m li
bra you're pisces
and you’re feisty
that you're like me
and you might find that we’re
like minded we
ain’t nothing alike di
va you like sleeves
i'm a wife beat
er you white t's
bet you like ski
ing though right skeez
the way you’re balancing yourself on the poles why don’t you grab this one and do the right thing like spike lee
and look out like you’re sightsee
ing and invite me
in the back and bite me
in the gat damn shake that ass and titties
cassidy
felt that dick so fat it could practically
snap her chastity
belt strap standing all in the back where my hotel's at she
actually
fell back and landed on somebody
else’s lap and laughed thought she
sat on pharrell’s hat go ahead baby
turn around lady

holy fuck


Didn't realize that song had that many rhymes, damn.
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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby DetroitSkills » Oct 18th, '14, 20:10

dam
MMLP2 11.5.13
#teamEncore
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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby shadyblogger » Oct 18th, '14, 20:10

DetroitSkills wrote:dam
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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby TheBoss123 » Oct 18th, '14, 20:32

Menzo wrote:And these kids are like parrots, they run around the house just like terrorists
Screaming, "fuck, shit, fuck" adult with a childish-like arrogance
Wild ever since the day I came out I was like, merits
Fuck that - I'd rather be loud and I like swearing
From the first album even the gals were like "tight lyrics
Dreamy eyes", but my fucking mouth was nightmare-ish

-
Pretty in your face but I dunno why I didn't make the connection that they were all strung together as roughly 5 syllables as opposed to a separate two and three pair :facepalm2


Damn son. I didnt realize they went back that far. Good shit. :y: Evil Twin is damn good.

Also the sheer amount of rhyming on twerk dat pop that is pretty insane, and it all makes sense. Pretty sick shit.
" Life can change your directions, even when you ain't planned it
All you can do it handle it, worst thing you can do is panic
Use it to your advantage, avoid insanity manage
To conquer, every obstacle, make impossible possible
Even when winning illogical, losing is still far from optional.." -T.I.
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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby RKOunion » Oct 19th, '14, 15:50

As The World Turns:

Hypochondriac, hanging out at the laundromat
Where all the raunchy fat white trashy blondes be at
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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby shadyblogger » Oct 19th, '14, 15:59

RKOunion wrote:As The World Turns:

Hypochondriac, hanging out at the laundromat
Where all the raunchy fat white trashy blondes be at


Nice find
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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby ronnie56 » Oct 19th, '14, 23:24

Having this happening (this happening)...
Then attack Eminem 'cause I rap this way (rap this way)...


two six syllable multis.
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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby Amadeo » Oct 21st, '14, 13:09

Evil Twin:

Hi! Faggot
Look who's back with a crab up his ass
Like a lobster crawled up there
Two rabbits, a koala bear and a ball of hair
And you're all aware I don't got it all upstairs
Guess that's why I'm an addict and it's so small up there
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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby M-Pyre » Oct 21st, '14, 15:38

Amadeo wrote:Evil Twin:

Hi! Faggot
Look who's back with a crab up his ass
Like a lobster crawled up there
Two rabbits, a koala bear and a ball of hair
And you're all aware I don't got it all upstairs
Guess that's why I'm an addict and it's so small up there

damn, nice one
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Re: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed three-p

Postby Eedee » Oct 21st, '14, 23:40

Menzo wrote:
"Can’t wait to get you into my Benz, take you for a spin
What you mean we ain't fucking, you take me for a friend?"


That's a nice little wordplay there
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