Redzek - Die One Day (a Tribute) [R.I.P]

[Le Tunisien]

This is a very personal song, i chose to share it, and even include it in my next tape which is coming out soon, entitled " "LivingTo Die" , i wrote and recorded this song as a tribute to my uncle who deserves so much respect, he died to tumor /kidney problem , fought bravely during 30 years, and only this year his body gave up , god rest his soul.







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[Jaba]

I like this. Do not sing! lol, I used to sing on my choruses and tbh it sounded terrible (worse than this). But overall good job. You do need to work on slurrynis more. But good job!

[Eedee]

Yeah the hook isn't all that great, but the content in the song was very touching. Had some good schemes in there and I could feel the grief in your voice. RIP to your uncle, buddy.

[mdemaz]

I like this. Do not sing! lol, I used to sing on my choruses and tbh it sounded terrible (worse than this). But overall good job. You do need to work on slurrynis more. But good job!

http://jaba24.bandcamp.com/track/i-hate-you

[DetroitSkills]

I like this. Do not sing! lol, I used to sing on my choruses and tbh it sounded terrible (worse than this). But overall good job. You do need to work on slurrynis more. But good job!

http://jaba24.bandcamp.com/track/i-hate-you

ded

[Le Tunisien]

I like this. Do not sing! lol, I used to sing on my choruses and tbh it sounded terrible (worse than this). But overall good job. You do need to work on slurrynis more. But good job!

http://jaba24.bandcamp.com/track/i-hate-you

bro you killed me

[MistaVijilantee]

I like this. Do not sing! lol, I used to sing on my choruses and tbh it sounded terrible (worse than this). But overall good job. You do need to work on slurrynis more. But good job!

http://jaba24.bandcamp.com/track/i-hate-you

Rap Game Columbine.
Sheesh.

[Jaba]

I like this. Do not sing! lol, I used to sing on my choruses and tbh it sounded terrible (worse than this). But overall good job. You do need to work on slurrynis more. But good job!

http://jaba24.bandcamp.com/track/i-hate-you

Would have been nice if you read my whole sentence....

[SarkingMajor]

I like this. Do not sing! lol, I used to sing on my choruses and tbh it sounded terrible (worse than this). But overall good job. You do need to work on slurrynis more. But good job!

http://jaba24.bandcamp.com/track/i-hate-you

[Le Tunisien]

ok chill guys haha back on the main subject...feedbacks please !

[Atone]

Ignore Jaba, i don't think he should be giving anybody rap lessons at this point

but i think this is good, you have a great voice, idk if you ever heard of Brown Boy, but you sound like him

i also like the beat on this, it's great for a tribute song

[Le Tunisien]

Ignore Jaba, i don't think he should be giving anybody rap lessons at this point

but i think this is good, you have a great voice, idk if you ever heard of Brown Boy, but you sound like him

i also like the beat on this, it's great for a tribute song

thats atone

[MUSIC_FEIN]

Great beat choice for this, it fit the song well.

I really liked this, very personal and relatable. The hook and overall song would have actually been really good with better mixing. Keep it up man!

[Le Tunisien]

Great beat choice for this, it fit the song well.

I really liked this, very personal and relatable. The hook and overall song would have actually been really good with better mixing. Keep it up man!

im glad you liked it dude, yes im sure i could have done better, this wasnt even mixed at all