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by **Enimee** » Oct 16th, '07, 22:34

kids with lack of credentials talkin smack about faggs with no potential
i laugh at ur last non-instrumental must be mental thinkin he can invent-new
words hiz verbs and slurs make me swerve this pen crazy in a figure 8 lately
this block got me lazy maybe i shud come out and make him pay for stating
claiming and hating venting and making me think hes shaking just stop please
freeze cease end this hipocracy blasphemous sloppy needs for dropping c's
i wish ud jus enter into a sieze-ur please sir stop or get knocked beneath earth
ive never seen worse a display of leizure look now uve finally awoken the little sleeper
knicknamed that damned flesh eater who would make u see hurt insane i am
mentally ill my brain can kill with thoughts so sick they'd make u'd feel under a giant
rain yup ur under the weather remember that after i reveal whats under my sweater
3-8's 9-mils and m-500's so why'd i plunder i wonder why id fight a dude light as a feather

by **Rain Matrix** » Oct 16th, '07, 22:36

DAMN! that must have came straight from tha hospital cuz it was sick :y:

by **James R.** » Oct 16th, '07, 23:29

Ill. period. nothing else to say.

by **Enimee** » Oct 17th, '07, 00:05

thanxz guys anymore feedback tho?

by **Tash8** » Oct 17th, '07, 00:09

did u really write this?

cause no offense, ur latest drops have been wack, while this was sick..

by **Enimee** » Oct 17th, '07, 00:10

yes i really wrote this i dont play that shit bro it took me under 10 mins right here in my local library

!

by **Tash8** » Oct 17th, '07, 00:11

Enimee wrote:yes i really wrote this i dont play that shit bro it took me under 10 mins right here in my local library !

well congrats and great job on it.

by **Enimee** » Oct 17th, '07, 00:13

preciate it bro figured id give yall a glimpse at my true talent

more feedback?

by **Giggles McKenzie** » Oct 17th, '07, 00:17

Wtf are you guys talking about, Enimee doesnt even deserve to live with these whack ass rhymes!

by **Enimee** » Oct 17th, '07, 00:17

battle me then bitch

by **Giggles McKenzie** » Oct 17th, '07, 00:18

Lets do it then bIznitch make something in the battle section

by **Enimee** » Oct 17th, '07, 03:08

can i get some legit feed please tho?

by **SajN** » Oct 17th, '07, 10:22

Yeah ..

That was really sick man :y:

It was a great job on it man !

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Oct 17th, '07, 14:50

lyrically its sick, near flawless.

no offence, but its a pity you cant flow it seems like a waste for it to just be posted on a forum

by **Arabian Shady** » Oct 17th, '07, 17:22

i mite not b in a position 2 say much but this looks like sum role model shit
u know, the type where other ppl say "man y dont u suk it up n write like this guy here"
u get wat i mean :sweating: