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National Panic

Postby Tash8 » Feb 13th, '08, 05:20

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_so ... ID=6264581

New beat, i just produced, I was trying a Dre like but it ended up nothing like dre lol

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Re: National Panic

Postby Xray » Feb 13th, '08, 06:24

its a good happy type beat..but melody is loud but hopefully it will be fixed wen mixed proper :y: and the melody is abit repeated too much but you defanately add a few more sounds to it..dunno what but add somfin :y: keep making beats :y:
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Re: National Panic

Postby mart85 » Feb 13th, '08, 22:34

yeah I agree^^... it's a good happy beat, but the main string melody is too loud... and the drums should hit a bit harder, altho once you turn down the strings, the drums might be just fine, it's hard to tell right now.... and you should get rid of that main string melody for like 8 bars in the verse part, to make it less repetitive and less "in your face", to make sure it doesn't distract from the vocals... but the beat had potential, there were cool elements in it :y:

and a little detail that might not be important, the title "national panic" made it sound like it was gonna be a dark beat, so Idk, maybe it's not the best title for that beat... it's not important, but I just thought I'd tell you lol

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Re: National Panic

Postby Tash8 » Feb 13th, '08, 22:45

lol mart, my pal told me the exact same thing about the title and =the feed...

naitional panic was for a beat i was making for sajjad a dark one, but it didn't fall thru so i just used the same name lol

and i'm not feelin this beat myself... tbh honest....

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Re: National Panic

Postby Xray » Feb 14th, '08, 07:42

Tash8 wrote:lol mart, my pal told me the exact same thing about the title and =the feed...

naitional panic was for a beat i was making for sajjad a dark one, but it didn't fall thru so i just used the same name lol

and i'm not feelin this beat myself... tbh honest....

haha

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:o what happen to that dark beat you were making u still making it :o
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