"Born to fall".. i never left.

[AspirinE]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/100409187da400b9/

"born to fall" ..



just thought id pay a visit to "the studio" section.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

? doesnt work....asks me if i want to delete the file?...wrong link?

[AspirinE]

ohh damns... gimme a min ill fix it.

[AspirinE]

fixed

[Tash8]

u no feedy others, me no feedy u.

haha, i'll check it when i get back, looking forward to it.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

the snare or whatever it should be sounds too rough...other than that its a pretty nice beat...
melody is a bit boring but works

[Tash8]

Is this sampled it sounds sampled

snare doesnt fit with strings, melody gets repetitive, I think if u add some short note piano every few bars it would remove some of the repetitiveness

Overall its got a nice vibe


PS could u feed my Loose Cannon beat?

[Epidemik]

i think its great!
imma download this and add to my freestyle instrumentals.
propz!

[IceAxe]

Snare dosen't fit, tough rough for the melody. The melody is sort of reptitive, but that would be fixed with vocals I think. And I'd turn the kicks up slightly more to give them more of a presence.

Good work over all though, it's got a cool feel to it

[Hadez]

it's nice man, kinda simple. but like everybody else said the snare doesn't fit well. it's good though, a nice mixtape beat.

[AspirinE]

I didnt sample the sample the tune, i made it from scratch using string notes.

Its not mastere yet, because i never put out mastered beats out for TR. There are 3 string notes that go much less loud in the mastered version and the snare has a dynamic processing effect that shortens it.


Props on the feed.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/100725810bb112b7/ heres the version with dynamics processing.

[Tash8]

the snare sounds better now, i'm still not hooked on the strings, it just don't flow with the drums, maybe you meant that idk..

anyways the bass is nice i like it.

[Xray]

damn thats some tight strings...just needs a dope rapper to spit the real shit on it.. and drums are pretty good too bass line is spot on your got some nice productions skills bro

[mart85]

cool drums... sounds much better in that new version... the strings are good as background/ambiance sounds the bass was good too, but I thought some notes were overlapping, maybe it's just me tho, nothing major...

good job, keep it up