I'm Back with a New Beat

[Tomega]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/127837972abfed29/

[Tash8]

okay listening

drums are cool, kick is a bit to loud, i suggest use some compressor on it and get the right spot for it... beat changes too much, it'd be REAL hard to rap on it... melodies are average, u kept repeating the same notes iwth diff instrument sometimes, which is kinda annoying... but yea overall not bad.. keep at it

and plz return feed.

[mart85]

it's cool, the melody is nice... the beat overall works and some people could use it (maybe with a "clearer" structure, kinda like Tash said)... I also agree with what he said about your melody tho. It works in the beat, but you should try to "challenge" yourself more and try to think of counter-melodies, and more background melodies to fit with your main melody.

and by the way, try to fade out your kick sample, cause we can hear a "click" every time the kick sound ends

keep it up

[Hadez]

well the pattern for the melody is nice. however using the same pattern with different instruments doesn't necessarily make the beat diverse. can't complain with the drums, cept for the click that Mart mentioned. not gonna get technical cuz i definately don't know the technicalities of beat making.

[Tomega]

thanx for the helpful comments.. i agree with all of you.. ive been too lazy making this beat, but im gonna make new ones with your advise in mind.