new beat ( just finished )

[M-Pyre]

called: better run (motherfucker)

it's got a tension buildup vibe to it...with a guitar holding down the basics.

here's the link:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/1626449259da29f6/

enjoy

and don't forget, feed is very much appreciated

[gladimnotsoluble]

This is raw, it's hard
it's a track someone could murder someone with
props i dig it

[Hadez]

pretty nice. i liked your patterns. the piano was a bit loud though. the tambourine was a nice touch. good beat

[M-Pyre]

This is raw, it's hard
it's a track someone could murder someone with
props i dig it

exactly my thoughts ...about the murdering part that is

pretty nice. i liked your patterns. the piano was a bit loud though. the tambourine was a nice touch. good beat

hmm, and here I go thinking that I had all of my string instruments mixdown perfecly
I'll change it up in the next version when I lay down the vocals for it.

good looking



keep the feed coming

[Xray]

beat sounds hot, besides the strings, i don't think the strings fit in.

at 1:35 loved that part everything was good. besides the strings.

EDIT: heard the beat for the second time, the strings kinda grew on me, i actually like them

[M-Pyre]

beat sounds hot, besides the strings, i don't think the strings fit in.

at 1:35 loved that part everything was good. besides the strings.

EDIT: heard the beat for the second time, the strings kinda grew on me, i actually like them

so at first you didn't like the strings but afterwards it kinda grew on you..?

cool

[Tash8]

real real slow beat, will need a real good rapper on this to be able to have a good song

hihats are a bit too loud.. this sounds more like something u'd hear in a movie with those strings.. the piano is cool.. at 1:35 its kinda weird, like idk i think it's the mixing, when both the pianos are playing seems too distracting, i feel like one need to be panned to a diff side.. so it works better, but both patterns are sick..

i'm not feeling the snare that much, kick is good. i think u could raise the low end a bit though. like jsut a tiny bit... i like the change ups, makes beat a lot less repetitive..

i think that main piano has a bit too much reverb..

there's a sudden stop somewhere late in teh song around 3:26, dunno if u meant that but if u didn't u'd probably wanna fix it.

overall good beat

[M-Pyre]

real real slow beat, will need a real good rapper on this to be able to have a good song

hihats are a bit too loud.. this sounds more like something u'd hear in a movie with those strings.. the piano is cool.. at 1:35 its kinda weird, like idk i think it's the mixing, when both the pianos are playing seems too distracting, i feel like one need to be panned to a diff side.. so it works better, but both patterns are sick..

i'm not feeling the snare that much, kick is good. i think u could raise the low end a bit though. like jsut a tiny bit... i like the change ups, makes beat a lot less repetitive..

i think that main piano has a bit too much reverb..

there's a sudden stop somewhere late in teh song around 3:26, dunno if u meant that but if u didn't u'd probably wanna fix it.

overall good beat

DAMN, thnks for that

thats some good constructive feedback


just so you know there's only 1 piano running in this beat, the other which you might have meant is a guitar, a jazz guitar to be exact.
and that sudden stop near the end of the beat was a little break I created, so no worries there
but thnks for those tips about the drums! I will try to mix them better along with the instruments as I will take another look at it

good looking!!

[Tash8]

real real slow beat, will need a real good rapper on this to be able to have a good song

hihats are a bit too loud.. this sounds more like something u'd hear in a movie with those strings.. the piano is cool.. at 1:35 its kinda weird, like idk i think it's the mixing, when both the pianos are playing seems too distracting, i feel like one need to be panned to a diff side.. so it works better, but both patterns are sick..

i'm not feeling the snare that much, kick is good. i think u could raise the low end a bit though. like jsut a tiny bit... i like the change ups, makes beat a lot less repetitive..

i think that main piano has a bit too much reverb..

there's a sudden stop somewhere late in teh song around 3:26, dunno if u meant that but if u didn't u'd probably wanna fix it.

overall good beat

just so you know there's only 1 piano running in this beat, the other which you might have meant is a guitar, a jazz guitar to be exact.

my bad, u should probably pan that then.

[M-Pyre]

real real slow beat, will need a real good rapper on this to be able to have a good song

hihats are a bit too loud.. this sounds more like something u'd hear in a movie with those strings.. the piano is cool.. at 1:35 its kinda weird, like idk i think it's the mixing, when both the pianos are playing seems too distracting, i feel like one need to be panned to a diff side.. so it works better, but both patterns are sick..

i'm not feeling the snare that much, kick is good. i think u could raise the low end a bit though. like jsut a tiny bit... i like the change ups, makes beat a lot less repetitive..

i think that main piano has a bit too much reverb..

there's a sudden stop somewhere late in teh song around 3:26, dunno if u meant that but if u didn't u'd probably wanna fix it.



overall good beat

just so you know there's only 1 piano running in this beat, the other which you might have meant is a guitar, a jazz guitar to be exact.

my bad, u should probably pan that then.

maybe I will

thnks for the feedback man

[KDEWolf]

LOL sounds real corney. Just the whole vib and the sounds u used. Sounds like some corner 80s movie score hahahhahahah . Also the Piano is really basic and the M-pyre tag sounds hella funny.

[M-Pyre]

LOL sounds real corney. Just the whole vib and the sounds u used. Sounds like some corner 80s movie score hahahhahahah . Also the Piano is really basic and the M-pyre tag sounds hella funny.

maybe thats what I was heading for